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An Everlasting Love by ~Daige:iconDaige:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Sonnet




How do you bridge the gap between two hearts?
The times we’ve had the good and the bad…
How does one even begin to think to start?
But all along it may make us some mad.

Know how it feels and the truth of our love
Although we may be six hundred miles far
And that it truly comes from Heaven above
I can’t tak’t when no one knows what we are.

I’ll give you love unconditionally,
Say it’s irrational, unpredictable,
If you love me incomprehensibly,
Love is universally understandable.

I give you my heart and soul forever,
Christy and Dani, better together.
©2008-2009 ~Daige
:icondaige:

Author's Comments

wrote this for english about my girlfriend and i :)
enjoy!


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everyone needs love <3


9~8~07

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:iconeikaj:
~eikaj Nov 3, 2008, 6:25:38 AM
cute!
i see you got the picture working too! love it!

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eikaj
:hug: :glomp: everyone needs hugs
:icondaige:
~Daige Nov 3, 2008, 8:28:19 AM
heh, thanks :)

oh yeah, it has something to do with the preview just below. thanks jackie! im looking for your next thing too missy!!
:iconeikaj:
~eikaj Nov 3, 2008, 4:01:32 PM
lol.
OH! i have to tell you about NaNoWriMo. National novel writing month. starting nov 1 to 30th, you've got 30 days to write 50 thousand words for a novel. i'm doing this suicidal challenge. i'm super excited. i don't know if feel comfortable about posting it here yet, especially if i'm just writing and not editing it at all until december...
it's about dreams and the such.

I did write a poem the other day..it's not that great i don't know if i'll post it.

--
eikaj
:hug: :glomp: everyone needs hugs
:icondaige:
~Daige Nov 3, 2008, 7:03:14 PM
haha
D'oh! jk...oh sweet. well goodluck lol 50,000 words?!haha im gonna wanna read it i know that!! well, message me it or something!!
cool cool B-)

you could scrap it..what is it about?
:iconeikaj:
~eikaj Nov 4, 2008, 5:15:37 AM
Im not posting a whole story like that, especially if it's realy raw. i don't know.

dreams. intricate...
this girl is half real half dreamt up.
there's also alot of lucid dreaming

--
eikaj
:hug: :glomp: everyone needs hugs
:icondaige:
~Daige Nov 4, 2008, 7:12:14 AM
lol, i didnt say post woman! i said message!!! i know how you are goofball :p or maybe ill come visit you at school and you can show it to me or we can meet somewhere...???

well, dreams always are intricacate but also have those special little things in them; that make them all the more interesting and better.
hmm...jackie's dreamt up girl?? this could be interesting lol haha!
see, now you've got my undivided attention
:iconeikaj:
~eikaj Nov 5, 2008, 2:04:53 PM
haha. maybe we can meet sometime.
mm she's sexy! XD
it's more intriacute than that

--
eikaj
:hug: :glomp: everyone needs hugs
:icondaige:
~Daige Nov 7, 2008, 7:06:41 PM
haha saweeettt :joy: i miss my jackie!
lol oooo intriguinggg! :D XD
ooh i see

--
Daige
:glomp::hug:
A penny for your thoughts, a nickel for a kiss and a dime if you tell me you love me.
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